Audio critique: I thought that there was quite a bit of ambient noise during the interview that made it difficult to understand what the interviewees were saying. I think they did a good job with the cuts;
they were clean and smooth.
Photo critique: I thought the photos were extremely well done and very creative. The quality was amazing and the photos
were synchronized with the audio very well.
Storytelling critique: I thought that the story flowed very well between interviewees. I think it ended well and not too
I think the story and photos were really well done in Zak Bolender and Justin Trygg’s “Wish Upon a Zombie“. The zombie walk was timely and a fun and interesting story.
- Audio critique: I thought the audio flowed well and the ambient noise in the beginning was relevant. I could hear the interviewees clearly, and the cuts were clean. The only time the audio was off was at the end when someone kept talking and then it ended abruptly.
Photo critique: I thought the photos were fun and flowed well with the audio. The subtitles at the bottom were a bit small,
but other than that the photos were well done and creative.
- Storytelling critique: I thought the story flowed very well, and was easy to follow. However, the story ended abruptly.
I liked the subject of the story for Zach Greubel and Peter Stevens’ “Mitch Kunce: A Brewing Artisan in Laramie“. The Library Sports Grille and Brewery has been around for a long time, and I love it, so the story really interested me.
Audio Critique: The first interview was fairly easy to hear, with just a bit of background ambient noise, but I could barely
hear the second interview (of the bar patron) because there was too much background noise that it drowned him out. Other than that, I liked the ambient noise of the beer pouring.
Photo critique: I really enjoyed the photos in this project. I thought they were creatively done, and loved the ones of the
individual beers; they looked so good!
- Storytelling critique: I thought the story flowed nicely, and I appreciate that someone highlighted the man behind the brews finally. It was a very interesting story. I think the story ended abruptly.
After viewing other student’s work, I learned how to set up more creative photo shots. Instead of shooting something straight
on, get a different angle or get someone while they are talking and look